Showing posts with label Week 4. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Week 4. Show all posts

Sunday, September 18, 2016

Week 4 Review

I really enjoy the daily announcements, because if it weren't for them I think I would be curled up in a ball somewhere! My favorite thing from the daily announcements this week had to be the Star Paws poster.
While it was super cute and fun to look at, it also represented one of the may ways that we can change a story. With my writings each week I'm trying not to get into a rut, where I use the same style over and over again. This helped provide me with some fresh perspective. For this week I have made sure to back up my pages and my writings! I think the stories in particular are important to back up, because they can be used for future job portfolios as an example of the different kinds of writing you can do! 

Announcements: I actually do have an announcement that I would love to share with the class, if you feel it is applicable! I am a member of Lindsey and Asp and I work on the University Club account. University Club is having their first event "Flip Night" on September 30th. This is reserved for people of drinking age and in a graduate or PhD program. Alumni are also welcome! I understand that most people in this class are undergraduates, but on the off chance that there are some 4+1 students like me, I would love to share! 

Famous Last Words: A Rough Week

This week was very difficult for me. I got back into Norman late on Sunday and ran out of time to do my first reading for this class. I am very excited that we are able to make up points; it helps to put things in perspective.

This week, much like the last few weeks, I completed my writing at my desk. Sitting at my desk helps me to stay focused without the temptation of watching TV or getting on my phone. I have learned, especially through this class, that with the weeks being so unpredictable the best thing to do is try to get work done early! This is something that has helped me in the past and will definitely help me in this class!

I read some great stories this week. I like seeing the different styles my classmates choose, because it helps me get inspiration as well as grow as a writer. One thing I struggle with is creating dialogue my characters. I know what I want them to say, but I have a hard time putting it to words. Seeing how other writers do it helps me learn different ways and methods on how to incorporate it into my own writing.

One style that I have been seeing in my classmate’s stories is the method of creating a story within a story. I really enjoy this style and I might try to incorporate it into one of my future stories. One of the biggest challenges I see with using a style like this is making sure you don’t loose track of the original story.  I don’t trouble reaching the minimum word count, but I do have trouble going over the word count. For next weeks story I really want to find a way to make my story shorter and more effective. With length sometimes come unnecessary details.

These are all the things I want to work on this week, however the most important thing I need to do is work ahead! I know this coming weekend is going to be hectic, so I think this will help me in the long-run! Have a great week guys and keep working!!

 Here is some motivation for the week, you got this! Lily Pulitzer 

Tech Tip: Google Site Website

Hi and welcome to the beginning of my website for Myth and Folklore! I have chosen to do the storybook project and I am really excited to start designing and writing the content for the site. For my storybook I am doing a project that I am calling "The College of the Elite," where different mythological creatures and people can go to meet and learn, but don't let this idiclic place fool you. There are always problems lurking beneath the surface!

If you want to see the EARLY stages of my site, click here!

Thursday, September 15, 2016

Story: Genies for Hire


 As I walked by I saw the “For Hire” sign in the window and knew this is the place I was looking for. The brightly lit sign outside boasted that is was Iagos’ diner, home of the world famous burgers. As I walked in I was greeted with the thick aroma that all diners seemed to have. I followed the hostess back to an available booth, while checking out my fellow diners. Just as I was about to sit down I saw him, he was tall with dark brown hair with a streak of blue in it. To anyone else he seemed like a normal college-age boy, but if you looked beyond his appearance you would begin to see the subtle tale-tell signs of his kind. His eyes were deep and held a glimmer of a smirk like he knew more than you, while his movements where wispy and graceful, he seemed to float from table to table as he was taking orders. As he approached my table, I was careful not to make eye contact with him until the last possible moment. Meeting his eye I saw him stumble in recognition. Not the kind of familiarity, but the kind of familiarity that happens when two unordinary people meet.

Schooling his features he asked, “Welcome to Iagos, my name is Raf, what can I start you off with?”

“Ill just take a water for now, but there is something you can tell me, why is a genie working in a diner in the middle of Las Vegas?” I asked as I watched him stiffen.

“I’m sorry, I don’t know what you are talking about,” he said, as he began to turn away.

“Wow, I never thought I would see the mighty genie of the ring run away from anyone. “ I taunted. I needed him to understand that I wasn’t there to expose him. I just needed his help.

“What do you want from me? I have left your kind alone, I am of no bother to you here.”  I winced.  If there were one-thing genies hated more than those cartoon pictures of them on TV, it was people who had magic. To them, the only beings that should be capable of wielding magic were genies. So, to them, someone like me who was born with the ability to see beyond glimmers and even wield minor forms of magic, were abominations. To ordinary humans we went unnoticed, we were practically fully human ourselves, but to genies we lit up like a lamp.

“Please, I just need ten minutes of your time.” He eyed me and slowly sat down.

“What do you want?” I took a deep breath.

“My name is Jenna and I need your help. A malevolent sorcerer has imprisoned my father and I can’t stop him by myself. “ I finished in a rush, we didn’t have time for the long story.
He looked at me closely, “Why should I care about your father?” He wasn’t rude when he asked this just curious,

“My father is the ruler and regulator of magic, the Keeper of the Lamp.” As I said this I saw him sit up. Regardless of genies views on magic people, they would never dare to go against my father. They respected him and his kindness, but knew that my father had the power to trap any unruly genie or magic person in the lamp.

“Who has him?” He asked.

“His advisor, he is an evil man and is trying to overthrow my father. Please I need your help. I can only see magic, so I am of no use against someone like him. “

“ I will help you, for your father, but if we are to succeed we are going to need a friend of mine,” with that he stood and began walking toward the door. I was about to ask what he planned to do about leaving his job in the middle of a shift, but with one look, I decided that it wasn’t worth it. I followed him as he walked; we were heading toward Caesars Palace. I sarcastically thought that he might want to take in a show before we save the world. I quickly ate my words when I saw that we were indeed walking into the hotel toward the ballroom. The sign on the door said it was a show for the “Magical Max.” I rolled my eyes at the thought of a genie wanting to see some bogus magic show. When we walked into the ballroom I saw that the man on the state was no ordinary magician, he was a genie.


 A genies lamp and the story it told. Web source 

When we walked in the man on stage shuddered and then simply continued on with his act. We took a seat and I was about to ask Raf what we were doing when he shushed me. After the show Max, the magician/genie approached our table.

Before he could utter a word Raf interrupted him, “ The king needs our help, are you in?” Plain and simple, I got the feeling that Raf was a man of little words. Like Raf, Max looked very familiar, as I looked at his face I began to piece together how I knew him.

“Oh my gosh, you’re the genie of the lamp!” I said excitedly, the genie of the lamp was the most renowned and powerful genie out there and here his is at a hotel in Vegas acting in a sideshow.  He gave me a debonair smile and took my hand.

“Welcome Jenna, or should I say your majesty?” I was dumbfounded, how had he guessed who I was? But with one look from Raf I closed my moth just in time to see Max wink at me.

“Well are you ready to save the world?” I said as we left the Vegas strip and went to save my father.

Authors Note:

This story is based off of the story of Aladdin and the Wonderful Lamp. The original story has two genies (the genie of the ring and the genie of the lamp) I knew in my story I wanted to make them free. I also think in the original story the importance of the genies were unwritten, yes Aladdin is the main character, but without the help of the genies he would not have been able to do anything. Throughout my story I also included bits from Disney’s version of Aladdin, like Jenna representing Jasmine and Iago the parrot for Iago’s diner.

Bibliography: These notes are based on the reading, "Arabian Nights" by Scheherazade

Tuesday, September 13, 2016

Reading Notes: Aladdin and the Wonderful Lamp

These are the reading notes for part B of Arabian Nights.

The first thing I noticed about the readings is that Aladdin's uncle in the story first appeared as if he were a fairy godmother. . .godfather! That is until you it is reveled that he is an evil magician                        and is not Aladdin's uncle. I really like the magician as a villain for the story because the idea that he  was playing a part is interesting to me. The best villains are those that are cunning and this magician definitely applies.

As I read this story I noticed how big of a role Aladdin's Palace played in it. Rather than being a home, the palace seemed to become a trophy for Aladdin. This is very similar to the Disney movie when Aladdin began to get a little over-confident because of what the genie had granted him. For my story I want to play with the idea of the genies banning together and being the ones in charge. While they might be a slave to the lamp and ring, they hold more power than their
master.

This is a cartoon version of Aladdin and the Wonderful lamp by P. A. Powers, to go along with my modern retelling. Web source 

A modern setting might make this story more interesting. I like the tradition that is weaved throughout the story like the finishing of the window and the switching of the cups. I am going to play around with the use of a modern setting and characters. I want to make both of the genies people who when they meet devise a plan to take back their lives.

Bibliography: These notes are based on the reading, "Arabian Nights" by Scheherazade