Schooling his features he asked, “Welcome to Iagos, my name
is Raf, what can I start you off with?”
“Ill just take a water for now, but there is something you
can tell me, why is a genie working in a diner in the middle of Las Vegas?” I
asked as I watched him stiffen.
“I’m sorry, I don’t know what you are talking about,” he
said, as he began to turn away.
“Wow, I never thought I would see the mighty genie of the
ring run away from anyone. “ I taunted. I needed him to understand that I
wasn’t there to expose him. I just needed his help.
“What do you want from me? I have left your kind alone, I am
of no bother to you here.” I
winced. If there were one-thing genies
hated more than those cartoon pictures of them on TV, it was people who had
magic. To them, the only beings that should be capable of wielding magic were
genies. So, to them, someone like me who was born with the ability to see
beyond glimmers and even wield minor forms of magic, were abominations. To
ordinary humans we went unnoticed, we were practically fully human ourselves,
but to genies we lit up like a lamp.
“Please, I just need ten minutes of your time.” He eyed me
and slowly sat down.
“What do you want?” I took a deep breath.
“My name is Jenna and I need your help. A malevolent
sorcerer has imprisoned my father and I can’t stop him by myself. “ I finished
in a rush, we didn’t have time for the long story.
He looked at me closely, “Why should I care about your
father?” He wasn’t rude when he asked this just curious,
“My father is the ruler and regulator of magic, the Keeper
of the Lamp.” As I said this I saw him sit up. Regardless of genies views on
magic people, they would never dare to go against my father. They respected him
and his kindness, but knew that my father had the power to trap any unruly
genie or magic person in the lamp.
“Who has him?” He asked.
“His advisor, he is an evil man and is trying to overthrow
my father. Please I need your help. I can only see magic, so I am of no use
against someone like him. “
“ I will help you, for your father, but if we are to succeed
we are going to need a friend of mine,” with that he stood and began walking
toward the door. I was about to ask what he planned to do about leaving his job
in the middle of a shift, but with one look, I decided that it wasn’t worth it.
I followed him as he walked; we were heading toward Caesars Palace. I
sarcastically thought that he might want to take in a show before we save the
world. I quickly ate my words when I saw that we were indeed walking into the
hotel toward the ballroom. The sign on the door said it was a show for the “Magical
Max.” I rolled my eyes at the thought of a genie wanting to see some bogus
magic show. When we walked into the ballroom I saw that the man on the state was
no ordinary magician, he was a genie.
When we walked in the man on stage shuddered and then simply
continued on with his act. We took a seat and I was about to ask Raf what we
were doing when he shushed me. After the show Max, the magician/genie
approached our table.
Before he could utter a word Raf interrupted him, “ The king
needs our help, are you in?” Plain and simple, I got the feeling that Raf was a
man of little words. Like Raf, Max looked very familiar, as I looked at his
face I began to piece together how I knew him.
“Oh my gosh, you’re the genie of the lamp!” I said
excitedly, the genie of the lamp was the most renowned and powerful genie out
there and here his is at a hotel in Vegas acting in a sideshow. He gave me a debonair smile and took my hand.
“Welcome Jenna, or should I say your majesty?” I was dumbfounded,
how had he guessed who I was? But with one look from Raf I closed my moth just
in time to see Max wink at me.
“Well are you ready to save the world?” I said as we left
the Vegas strip and went to save my father.
Authors Note:
This story is based off of the story of Aladdin and the
Wonderful Lamp. The original story has two genies (the genie of the ring and the
genie of the lamp) I knew in my story I wanted to make them free. I also think
in the original story the importance of the genies were unwritten, yes Aladdin
is the main character, but without the help of the genies he would not have
been able to do anything. Throughout my story I also included bits from Disney’s
version of Aladdin, like Jenna representing Jasmine and Iago the parrot for
Iago’s diner.
Bibliography: These notes are based on the reading, "Arabian Nights" by Scheherazade
Again, I really liked how you related this to modern day! Seeing the elements of the combined stories was really good and enjoyable. This is the first story I've read that just ends without being finished and I think that's really cool. Sometimes I feel like I have so much to say and not enough words to say it, but I never think of just cutting it off. Good job!
ReplyDeleteWow! I really liked how you changed this story and made it modern without taking away the gist of the story! Great job! I wonder what happened after they let to go to Vegas... that is always one thing about cliff hangers, I love them because it leaves so much to the imagination but I also get frustrated with them because I want to find out what happens with them! I honestly wonder how their trip went and if they found her father! The story takes a 360 turn from the beginning to the end; at first I honestly was not sure where you were going to go with it or how it related to any of the tales (or the title for that matter), but once I continued reading and Jenna started talking about how the sorcerer had taken her father captive and she needed a genie, everything started to fall into place. Great job! I look forward to reading more of your work!
ReplyDeleteKatie, this was another great read and update to modern times. I read the same source story for this week's assigned reading so I picked up on the elements very easily. I liked how you incorporated parts of the Disney version of the story as well, because without it it's somewhat grim in my opinion. I also like the way you incorporated both genies. All in another great read. Thanks for sharing and I look forward to more of your work.
ReplyDeleteKatie, my favorite part about your story are the details that you present. When you described the genie, I felt like I was looking at a picture rather than reading a description; and those are the types of stories that I like the most. I also enjoy reading stories that have a lot of dialogue because I feel like I am there experiencing the journey with the characters. Great job on both of those things!
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