Wednesday, September 7, 2016

Story: Olympus High


Authors note and bib, image and formation

Welcome to Olympus High School home of the Mighty Greeks. 

This is the sign that greets every student as they walk into school at the start of each day. Personally, I think it is a little misleading. The Might Greeks? More like the Mighty Losers seeing as we have lost the last six football games this year. Ever since our star player Alex sat out. Alex and our team captain, Henry got in a stupid fight over a girl and now they aren’t talking and Alex is sitting out. He still comes to all of our games, but now he just sits in the front row watching. He’s acting a little like a baby, if you ask me. Of course, no one ever does. I’m just Peter, the stand-in for Alex until he is back in the game. Sure, I get to start the games now, but I know that is only temporary until Alex and Henry get over this argument. We can’t afford for them to be fighting as we approach the big championship game against the Trojans. The Trojans were our biggest rivals, ever since Henry's girlfriend started dating the captain of the Trojans team.

I can’t help but thing that it is all a waste of time and effort as I walk into practice that afternoon. Oddly, our principal, Mr. Bolt, is the face that greets me instead of our coach Hera. 

“Go Greeks! Welcome men! This is the big week, on Friday night all of you will go out to represent our school against the Trojans. I don’t think I need to remind you how big this victory will be for our school.” He paused and stared at us. I don’t know what it is about our principal but when he stares at you, with his piercing eyes it makes you a little concerned about what will happen if you disappoint him.

“I know you all will do great and you wont disappoint me.” He finished and then walked off the field.

“Well you heard him boys, my brother can be a little competitive when it comes to the championship. Now, back to business. We need to address which of you will be starting the game on Friday. So far I have Henry, Sam, Michael, Alex . . .”

“Excuse me, coach,” interrupted Alex. “ I won’t be playing this game. “

“What do you mean you wont be playing? I have tolerated your bad attitude for long enough, you will either play this weekend or you can find yourself another after school activity.” The coach huffed as see stared at Alex.

“I am sorry, but I just wont be able to make it. “ Alex said as he walked off the field.

I knew the coach was only seconds away from blowing up. Before she could speak, I rushed to say, “Let me talk to him coach, I’m his best friend I bet I can talk sense into him.” The coach agreed. As I walked after Alex I wondered why I even volunteered, If Alex didn’t play I would get to wear the quarterback jersey and hopefully lead my team to victory. However, I knew we needed Alex, I knew I needed to put aside what I wanted for the good of the team.

“Alex, wait up!.” I yelled as I chased Alex down the hall.

“Peter you are going to change my mind. I just don’t want to be on the same team as Henry any more. “ Alex said with resignation.

“What about me? What about the school? You know the team will never win without you! We need you to lead us. Without you I would never have even made the team, without those extra practices where you helped me, I would still be sitting on the sidelines. You helped me then and I am going to help you now. Forget Henry and forget the fight, what matters are those two hours on the field, you can put aside your difference for that long cant you?” I pleaded with him.

This is a depiction of the Trojan War by Corinthian Aryballos. Web Source 

Alex looked at me and patted me on the back like a brother. “I will play this one game, but then I am done. It will be your time to lead the team. Henry might be the captain, but the quarterback is the heart of the team.” With another pat to the back, Alex and I continued on to the parking lot where we ran into Henry.

“Alex, I want to talk to you about Friday’s game.” Henry said.

“Save it, Peter already convinced me to play, not for you, but for the team. “ Alex said with a stiff nod.

“Can we please put this behind us Alex? If we truly want to win we need our minds focused on the game and not on this ridiculous argument. I talked to Helen. She admitted she went to the Trojans just to make me mad. You were right. ” Henry said.

“ Trust me, its not something I wanted to be right about. I’m sorry you had to find out like that. “ Alex said as he looked up at Henry.

“ I should have trusted you. If I had we could have put this all behind us and not wasted any more time. “ Said Henry.

“Well then we better get to practice so we don’t waste any more.” Said Alex as he patted Henry’s shoulder.

 FINAL SCORE
MIGHTY GREEKS 45

TROJANS 39



Bibliography: These notes are based on the reading, "The Iliad" by Homer, remastered by Alfred J. Church.

Authors Note:

I used the story of the Iliad for inspiration for my story. The story of the Iliad takes place after Helen in taken by a rival prince Paris. Helen's husband calls on all of the fellow prices in the land to help him get Helen back. What ensues is several battles where many are lost. Achilles (Alex in my story) Is a great warrior but when the King become jealous he begins to take things that aren't his according to how they divided their conquests. Because of this Achilles says he will not fight for the Greeks and sits out of the war. When Patroclus asks his dear friend Achilles if he can battle, Achilles says yes and gives him his armor. It isn't until Partroclus dies that Achilles begins to fight again. For my story I didn't want to kill off Partroclus (Peter), so instead I made him the voice of reason for the story. In the end the Greeks triumph and Achilles is back to his normal self.

3 comments:

  1. Old stories and myths updated to modern settings are always my favorite, so I really enjoyed how you mixed up the story here. All the little nods and references you sprinkled into the story made it especially engaging—looking for them was kind of like picking out the Easter eggs in a movie. I love the picture you found for the post, too; I can totally imagine them hanging football banners kind of like this along the halls of Olympus High each week before a big game.

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  2. Katie, I found your rewriting of the Iliad very interesting and with a neat ending. I found it pleasant that this time Peter ("Patroclus") didn't perish in the story because he seems to me as a character to root for in the story. Also your use of dialogue was a very good amount. There wasn't so much that I didn't understand the setting, but also not too little to where it was all plot description. Good job, and I look forward to more of your posts.

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  3. I love that you made the story take place in modern day. This style of writing always makes the morals of an old story easier to read and relate to in our world today. I think it can also be kind of difficult to do this so I applaud you for it. I really enjoyed this retelling, really good job!

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